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    Name of Magic; Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type/Subtype of Magic; Caster - Lost - Slayer
    Current Rank; D
    Description; This ancient Lost Magic was taught to Nasude by the Lord of the Lightning Dragons, Racornis, who found, raised and made Nasude a true warrior. This magic is a distinct type of Lost Magic, which utilizes the tremendous power of dragons. Just like a God and Demon Slayer, Dragon Slayers has their own respective element, which for example can be comsumed in order to restore or boost their power, but only in its pure form. The form of elemental magic they use is neutral (pure) one which is in between the light and dark side of the magical spectrum. This type of magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon non-human type opponents.

    Nasude has taught Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic, which gives him the ability to consume pure forms of lightning and likewise use it for his spells in many ways, such as in Offensive and Defensive ways. In addition, Dragon Slayers has improved senses compared to normal humans, like smell, hearing, strenght and sight. Also, the appearance of the lightning is depended on the user's feelings and mind, so the more serious Nasude is, the more intense are the lightning that surrounds him, so called "Will of Thunder".

    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Nasude can consume pure lightning, whether if it's from a spell or natural, in order to boost or restore his stats.
    - Due to his respective element, Nasude has an increased speed, which is a great advantage in battle.
    - Due to the element, Nasude can stun/paralyze people with his spells. It causes their speed to be cut in half for two posts if their endurance is not equal to the base power of the spells' ranks, and if the base power of the spells' ranks is more than double the endurance of the person hit by the spell, then they become completely paralyzed for two posts, but this will only work once on each person in a thread.
    Weaknesses:
    - Though Dragon Slayers get all of these perks, they do have one set back: Motion sickness. Dragon Slayers cannot ride on vehicles of why kind without getting motion sickness.
    - A Lightning Dragon Slayer's speed is superior, but the element is also very loud, which would give Nasude a disadvantage in stealth.
    - If Nasude uses his magic while being in contact with water, it would be dangerous for his allies to approach him or stay nearby him, due to the spreading of electricity. He would be forced to stay away from them, which would be bad, if they are fighting together.

    Traits;
    - As a Dragon Slayer, the user has 10% increased senses, including smell, hearing and sight.
    - Nasude also has an increased jump ability, which makes him able to jump up to 20 meters in the air when having his feet on a surface (this doesn't increase his speed movement, though. He can only jump as fast as his agility allows).
    - If up in the clouds, Nasude can jump between clouds like a bolt in order to move around areas rapidly. He can move 5 meters per jump and only jump 4 times as D Rank. It increases by 1 for every rank-up.
    - Nasude can turn himself into pure lightning and move up to 5 meters at D Rank directly, which is increased by 2 meters per rank-up. In this form, he is unaffected by physical and long-range attacks that aren't boosted by magic. He can only use this form 4 times per thread.

    First Generation Dragon Force:
    First Gen. Dragon Slayers have learned the magic from the Great Dragon of their respective element. First Gen Dragon Slayers can attain dragon force by devouring 1000 spell power worth of their element added together will allow them to trigger dragon force. One can also devour 1000 spell power of raw mana if one can obtain a source (ex. Etherion cannon). Basic elements in an area (such as a torch) will result in 5 spell power. If a torch has no reason being there with zero significant purpose you will be dealt with. Also you can't eat your own magic.

    Force will result in a large stat boost which is unique to each slayer whilst in their force mode (although all slayers have their stat boosts predetermined. (total stat boost will be +50)) 1st generation dragon force lasts 10 posts. 20+ goes to speed, 20+ to spell power and 10+ to Strenght.
    D Rank Spells:


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Magnet Fist (雷竜の磁拳, Rairyuu no Jiken)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user concentrates electrical energy into his fist, then, he launches himself towards the opponent with a charged and powerful punch.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - It's very effective to metal mages, as the damage is increased by 25%
    - Though it's a melee spell, the user can launch himself very far, being able to hit enemies from a long distance.
    - It also travels at a good speed.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's one-directioned, so the user can only launch himself in one direction and is unable to change direction, unless if he cancels the spell.
    - The spell can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - Any spell of higher rank can stop and damage the user, before he approaches the target.
    - It's a very loud spell and is easy to spot if the user tries to sneak attack.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Talons (雷竜のかぎ爪, Rairyuu no Kagitsume)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user charges lightning energy into his lower leg and foot, sharpening it and boosting its power. He then sends them towards the opponent as a kick. He can also split it up into both his legs and then do two kicks at once.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - The user can use this attack to counter another spell at the same rank.
    - The talons are very strong and can smash through the walls from a spell of the same rank.
    - If the user hits the target/opponent well enough, it'll get pushed 5ft/1.5 meters meters away.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's a melee spell, so the user won't be able to reach out for anyone further away than the max range of this spell.
    - The spell, just as the previous and next ones, can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - A strong wall of a higher rank will be able to block the spell without getting destroyed instantly.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 10 meters


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Thunderbolt (雷竜の雷獣, Rairyuu no Raijū)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user points his head towards the opponent. Small bolts of lightning will appear at the edge of his "horn" (which is his hair, it's just shaped as a horn). The user will then launch out the bolts in one beam of thunderbolts. out.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can move the launched thunderbolt in many different directions with the same speed as normal, until it has reached its max range.
    - It can be divided in five bolts, which each bolt has 1/5 D Rank damage in, if the user wants to, and therefore hit multiple targets.
    Weaknesses:
    - It'll have a little effect on earth magic users, compared to his other spells. The spell is reduced by 50% when against earth mages.
    - If the enemy has a greater defense spell of this magic's rank or higher, it won't do any damage.
    - This spell can only paralyze opponents when used as a singular bolt, if more than one bolt is fired then there are no paralytic effects.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Scales (雷竜の秤, Rairyuu no Hakari)
    Type; Defensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user covers himself with a cloak of lightning, which defends him from outcoming attacks.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Defends from other spells or offensive attacks of other types (for example physical attacks and such).
    - The user can move around as freely as normally with this spell activated.
    - If the target impacts the user's scales, he/she will get pushed 5ft/1.5 meters back.
    Weaknesses:
    - Doesn't do any damage, other than sending someone away.
    - If it takes damage of a spell that's a rank higher than the user, or more, it'll break down. If the opponent's spell is a rank higher or more, this spell won't protect Nasude in any way.
    - It won't paralyze anyone by contact.
    Effects;
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Size: Height - 3ft | Width - 3ft


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Slash (雷竜の斬り, Rairyuu no Kiri)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user slashes the air rapidly with his hands. This creates lightning slashes, which launches towards the opponent.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range, just like the Thunderbolt, and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can do up to 3 slashes in the air, each slash having 1/3 D Rank damage, which makes him able to hit multiple targets.
    - It's very sharp slashes and can cut through walls from the opponent's spell, if the same rank, and through spells that the user has a certain amount more spell power than.
    Weaknesses:
    - The slashes only moves in a speed of 75% of the original speed of the spell's rank.
    - If Nasude's arm slashes are stopped, the spell is cancelled.
    - It's not very effective to earth, decreasing the damage by 50%.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
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    Post by Rin Moriyama on Tue 01 Dec 2015, 8:43 am

    Corrections will be in this color. Please pm me with any questions or concerns you may have about my corrections.
    Kentai wrote:Name of Magic; Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type/Subtype of Magic; Caster - Lost - Slayer
    Current Rank; D
    Description; This ancient Lost Magic was taught to Nasude by the Lord of the Lightning Dragons, Racornis, who found, raised and made Nasude a true warrior. This magic is a distinct type of Lost Magic, which utilizes the tremendous power of dragons. Just like a God and Demon Slayer, Dragon Slayers has their own respective element, which for example can be comsumed in order to restore or boost their power, but only in its pure form. The form of elemental magic they use is neutral (pure) one which is in between the light and dark side of the magical spectrum. This type of magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon non-human type opponents.

    Nasude has taught Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic, which gives him the ability to consume pure forms of lightning and likewise use it for his spells in many ways, such as in Offensive and Defensive ways. In addition, Dragon Slayers has improved senses compared to normal humans, like smell, hearing, strenght and sight. Also, the appearance of the lightning is depended on the user's feelings and mind, so the more serious Nasude is, the more intense are the lightning that surrounds him, so called "Will of Thunder".

    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Nasude can consume pure lightning, whether if it's from a spell or natural, in order to boost or restore his stats.
    - Due to his respective element, Nasude has an increased speed, which is a great advantage in battle.
    - As a Lightning Dragon Slayer, he has complete control over the lightning element.
    Weaknesses:
    - Though Dragon Slayers get all of these perks, they do have one set back: Motion sickness. Dragon Slayers cannot ride on vehicles of why kind without getting motion sickness.
    - A Lightning Dragon Slayer's speed is superior, but the element is also very loud, which would give Nasude a disadvantage in stealth.
    - If Nasude uses his magic while being in contact with water, it would be dangerous for his allies to approach him or stay nearby him, due to the spreading of electricity. He would be forced to stay away from them, which would be bad, if they are fighting together.

    Traits;
    - As a Dragon Slayer, the user has 10% increased sense of smell.
    - The user also has 10% increased sense of hearing.
    - The lightning power is very wild and often leaves the target stunned after impact from a spell.<--- this sounds like a weakness, please change it to an actual trait.
    - Nasude can turn himself into pure lightning and move up to 5 meters at D Rank directly, which is increased by 2 meters per rank-up. In this form, he is unaffected by physical and long-range attacks that aren't boosted by magic. He can only use this form 6 times per thread.<--- 6 times is too much for a d rank, please lower it to 4.

    First Generation Dragon Force:
    First Gen. Dragon Slayers have learned the magic from the Great Dragon of their respective element. First Gen Dragon Slayers can attain dragon force by devouring 1000 spell power worth of their element added together will allow them to trigger dragon force. One can also devour 1000 spell power of raw mana if one can obtain a source (ex. Etherion cannon). Basic elements in an area (such as a torch) will result in 5 spell power. If a torch has no reason being there with zero significant purpose you will be dealt with. Also you can't eat your own magic.

    Force will result in a large stat boost which is unique to each slayer whilst in their force mode (although all slayers have their stat boosts predetermined. (total stat boost will be +50)) 1st generation dragon force lasts 10 posts. 20+ goes to speed, 20+ to spell power and 10+ to Strength.
    D Rank Spells:


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Magnet Fist (雷竜の磁拳, Rairyuu no Jiken)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user concentrates electrical energy into his fist, then, he launches himself towards the opponent with a charged and powerful punch.
    Information;
    Strengths:
    - <--- you are missing a third strength, please add one.
    - Though it's a melee spell, the user can launch himself very far, being able to hit enemies from a long distance.
    - It also travels at a good speed.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's one-direction, so the user can only launch himself in one direction and is unable to change direction, unless if he cancels the spell.
    - The spell can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - A strong wall can stop can be used to stop the user from approaching the target.<--- please change this to "Any spell of higher rank can stop the user from approaching the target"
    - It's a very loud spell and is easy to spot if the user tries to sneak attack.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 2 posts<--- up the cooldown to three posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 20
    Speed: 20 mps


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Talons (雷竜のかぎ爪, Rairyuu no Kagitsume)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user charges lightning energy into his feet and sends them towards the opponent.<--- please extend your description as it is a bit too short, and does not give a lot of information.
    Information;
    Strengths:
    - The user can use this attack to counter another spell at the same rank.
    - The talons are very strong and can smash through the walls from a spell of the same rank.
    - If the user hits the target/opponent well enough, it'll get pushed 20 meters away.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's a melee spell, so the user won't be able to reach out for anyone further away than the max range of this spell.
    - The spell, just as the previous and next ones, can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - A strong wall of a higher rank will be able to block the spell without getting destroyed instantly.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 2 posts<--- again, up the cooldown to 3 posts
    Range: 10 meters
    Damage: 20
    Speed: 20 mps (10 meters per half a second)<--- This mile per second converts 72,000 miles per hour. That is WAY too fast for a d rank spell. Your body cannot travel at that speed unless you were in the form of lightning when using this spell. Please lower this speed DRASTICALLY.


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Thunderbolt (雷竜の雷獣, Rairyuu no Raijū)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user points his head towards the opponent and launches a beam of thunderbolts out.<--- not enough info give, please extend description by at least 3 or more sentences.
    Information;
    Strengths:
    - This is a long-range and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can move the launched thunderbolt in many different directions with the same speed as normal, until it has reached its max range.
    - Causes D Rank Damage.
    Weaknesses:
    - It'll have a little effect on earth magic users, compared to his other spells.
    - If the enemy has a greater defense than this magic's rank, it won't have any good affect.
    - It'll only paralyze enemies of lower ranks than the user.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 20
    Speed: 20 mps

    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Scales (雷竜の秤, Rairyuu no Hakari)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user covers himself with a cloak of lightning, which defends him from incoming attacks.
    Information;
    Strengths:
    - Defends from other spells or offensive attacks of other types (for example physical attacks and such).
    - The user can move around as freely as normally with this spell activated.
    - If the target impacts the user's scales, he/she will get pushed 5 meters back.
    Weaknesses:
    - Doesn't do any damage, other than sending someone away.
    - If it takes too much damage, it'll break down.
    - It won't paralyze anyone by contact.
    Effects;
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Size: Height - 3ft | Width - 3ft


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Slash (雷竜の斬り, Rairyuu no Kiri)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user slashes the air rapidly with his hands. This creates lightning slashes, which launches towards the opponent.
    Information;
    Strengths:
    - This is a long-range, just like the Thunderbolt, and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can do up to 3 slashes in the air, which makes him able to hit multiple targets.
    - It's very sharp slashes and can easily cut through rocks and boulders; it can even cut through walls from the opponent's spell (just as long as the opponent is the same rank or lower).
    Weaknesses:
    - The user can't break defenses that are too strong for him.
    - If the opponent is close to Nasude, he can cancel the spell if he's fast enough.
    - It's not very effective to metal.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 2 posts<--- up to 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 20 (Divided into three if split up)
    Speed: 20 mps

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    Post by Rin Moriyama on Thu 03 Dec 2015, 9:20 am

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    Kentai wrote:Name of Magic; Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type/Subtype of Magic; Caster - Lost - Slayer
    Current Rank; D
    Description; This ancient Lost Magic was taught to Nasude by the Lord of the Lightning Dragons, Racornis, who found, raised and made Nasude a true warrior. This magic is a distinct type of Lost Magic, which utilizes the tremendous power of dragons. Just like a God and Demon Slayer, Dragon Slayers has their own respective element, which for example can be comsumed in order to restore or boost their power, but only in its pure form. The form of elemental magic they use is neutral (pure) one which is in between the light and dark side of the magical spectrum. This type of magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon non-human type opponents.

    Nasude has taught Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic, which gives him the ability to consume pure forms of lightning and likewise use it for his spells in many ways, such as in Offensive and Defensive ways. In addition, Dragon Slayers has improved senses compared to normal humans, like smell, hearing, strenght and sight. Also, the appearance of the lightning is depended on the user's feelings and mind, so the more serious Nasude is, the more intense are the lightning that surrounds him, so called "Will of Thunder".

    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Nasude can consume pure lightning, whether if it's from a spell or natural, in order to boost or restore his stats.
    - Due to his respective element, Nasude has an increased speed, which is a great advantage in battle.
    - As a Lightning Dragon Slayer, he has complete control over the lightning element.
    Weaknesses:
    - Though Dragon Slayers get all of these perks, they do have one set back: Motion sickness. Dragon Slayers cannot ride on vehicles of why kind without getting motion sickness.
    - A Lightning Dragon Slayer's speed is superior, but the element is also very loud, which would give Nasude a disadvantage in stealth.
    - If Nasude uses his magic while being in contact with water, it would be dangerous for his allies to approach him or stay nearby him, due to the spreading of electricity. He would be forced to stay away from them, which would be bad, if they are fighting together.

    Traits;
    - As a Dragon Slayer, the user has 10% increased senses, including smell, hearing and sight.
    - Nasude also has an increased jump ability, which makes him able to jump up to 20 meters in the air when having his feet on a surface (this doesn't increase his speed movement, though. He can only jump as fast as his agility allows).
    - The lightning power from Nasude's spells is very wild and can leave the hit target stunned after impact from a spell.
    - Nasude can turn himself into pure lightning and move up to 5 meters at D Rank directly, which is increased by 2 meters per rank-up. In this form, he is unaffected by physical and long-range attacks that aren't boosted by magic. He can only use this form 4 times per thread.

    First Generation Dragon Force:
    First Gen. Dragon Slayers have learned the magic from the Great Dragon of their respective element. First Gen Dragon Slayers can attain dragon force by devouring 1000 spell power worth of their element added together will allow them to trigger dragon force. One can also devour 1000 spell power of raw mana if one can obtain a source (ex. Etherion cannon). Basic elements in an area (such as a torch) will result in 5 spell power. If a torch has no reason being there with zero significant purpose you will be dealt with. Also you can't eat your own magic.

    Force will result in a large stat boost which is unique to each slayer whilst in their force mode (although all slayers have their stat boosts predetermined. (total stat boost will be +50)) 1st generation dragon force lasts 10 posts. 20+ goes to speed, 20+ to spell power and 10+ to Strenght.
    D Rank Spells:


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Magnet Fist (雷竜の磁拳, Rairyuu no Jiken)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user concentrates electrical energy into his fist, then, he launches himself towards the opponent with a charged and powerful punch.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - It's very effective to earth mages.<--- Earth is NOT a strength. Lightning VERY ineffective against earth. Please change this.
    - Though it's a melee spell, the user can launch himself very far, being able to hit enemies from a long distance.
    - It also travels at a good speed.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's one-directioned, so the user can only launch himself in one direction and is unable to change direction, unless if he cancels the spell.
    - The spell can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - Any spell of higher rank can stop the user from approaching the target.
    - It's a very loud spell and is easy to spot if the user tries to sneak attack.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35
    Speed: 20 meters per second


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Talons (雷竜のかぎ爪, Rairyuu no Kagitsume)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user charges lightning energy into his lower leg and foot, sharpening it and boosting its power. He then sends them towards the opponent as a kick. He can also split it up into both his legs and then do two kicks at once.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - The user can use this attack to counter another spell at the same rank.
    - The talons are very strong and can smash through the walls from a spell of the same rank.
    - If the user hits the target/opponent well enough, it'll get pushed 20 meters away.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's a melee spell, so the user won't be able to reach out for anyone further away than the max range of this spell.
    - The spell, just as the previous and next ones, can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - A strong wall of a higher rank will be able to block the spell without getting destroyed instantly.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 10 meters
    Damage: 35 (Halfed if split into both legs, so each does 17)
    Speed: 20 meters per second


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Thunderbolt (雷竜の雷獣, Rairyuu no Raijū)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user points his head towards the opponent. Small bolts of lightning will appear at the edge of his "horn" (which is his hair, it's just shaped as a horn). The user will then launch out the bolts in one beam of thunderbolts. out.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can move the launched thunderbolt in many different directions with the same speed as normal, until it has reached its max range.
    - Causes D Rank Damage.
    Weaknesses:
    - It'll have a little effect on earth magic users, compared to his other spells.
    - If the enemy has a greater defense than this magic's rank, it won't have any good affect.
    - It'll only paralyze enemies of lower ranks than the user.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35
    Speed: 20 meters per second


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Scales (雷竜の秤, Rairyuu no Hakari)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user covers himself with a cloak of lightning, which defends him from outcoming attacks.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Defends from other spells or offensive attacks of other types (for example physical attacks and such).
    - The user can move around as freely as normally with this spell activated.
    - If the target impacts the user's scales, he/she will get pushed 5 meters back.
    Weaknesses:
    - Doesn't do any damage, other than sending someone away.
    - If it takes too much damage, it'll break down.
    - It won't paralyze anyone by contact.
    Effects;
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Size: Height - 3ft | Width - 3ft


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Slash (雷竜の斬り, Rairyuu no Kiri)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user slashes the air rapidly with his hands. This creates lightning slashes, which launches towards the opponent.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range, just like the Thunderbolt, and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can do up to 3 slashes in the air, which makes him able to hit multiple targets.
    - It's very sharp slashes and can easily cut through rocks and boulders; it can even cut through walls from the opponent's spell (just as long as the opponent is the same rank or lower).
    Weaknesses:
    - The user can't break defenses that are too strong for him.
    - If the opponent is close to Nasude, he can cancel the spell if he's fast enough.
    - It's not very effective to metal.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35 (Divided into three if split up, which does about 11 each)
    Speed: 20 meters per second







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    *lifts the BUMP hammer* Time to bump this... no bad words >.< *shuts*



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    Kentai wrote:Name of Magic; Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type/Subtype of Magic; Caster - Lost - Slayer
    Current Rank; D
    Description; This ancient Lost Magic was taught to Nasude by the Lord of the Lightning Dragons, Racornis, who found, raised and made Nasude a true warrior. This magic is a distinct type of Lost Magic, which utilizes the tremendous power of dragons. Just like a God and Demon Slayer, Dragon Slayers has their own respective element, which for example can be comsumed in order to restore or boost their power, but only in its pure form. The form of elemental magic they use is neutral (pure) one which is in between the light and dark side of the magical spectrum. This type of magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon non-human type opponents.

    Nasude has taught Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic, which gives him the ability to consume pure forms of lightning and likewise use it for his spells in many ways, such as in Offensive and Defensive ways. In addition, Dragon Slayers has improved senses compared to normal humans, like smell, hearing, strenght and sight. Also, the appearance of the lightning is depended on the user's feelings and mind, so the more serious Nasude is, the more intense are the lightning that surrounds him, so called "Will of Thunder".

    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Nasude can consume pure lightning, whether if it's from a spell or natural, in order to boost or restore his stats.
    - Due to his respective element, Nasude has an increased speed, which is a great advantage in battle.
    - As a Lightning Dragon Slayer, he has complete control over the lightning element.
    Weaknesses:
    - Though Dragon Slayers get all of these perks, they do have one set back: Motion sickness. Dragon Slayers cannot ride on vehicles of why kind without getting motion sickness.
    - A Lightning Dragon Slayer's speed is superior, but the element is also very loud, which would give Nasude a disadvantage in stealth.
    - If Nasude uses his magic while being in contact with water, it would be dangerous for his allies to approach him or stay nearby him, due to the spreading of electricity. He would be forced to stay away from them, which would be bad, if they are fighting together.

    Traits;
    - As a Dragon Slayer, the user has 10% increased senses, including smell, hearing and sight.
    - Nasude also has an increased jump ability, which makes him able to jump up to 20 meters in the air when having his feet on a surface (this doesn't increase his speed movement, though. He can only jump as fast as his agility allows).
    - The lightning power from Nasude's spells is very wild and can leave the hit target stunned after impact from a spell.
    - Nasude can turn himself into pure lightning and move up to 5 meters at D Rank directly, which is increased by 2 meters per rank-up. In this form, he is unaffected by physical and long-range attacks that aren't boosted by magic. He can only use this form 4 times per thread.

    First Generation Dragon Force:
    First Gen. Dragon Slayers have learned the magic from the Great Dragon of their respective element. First Gen Dragon Slayers can attain dragon force by devouring 1000 spell power worth of their element added together will allow them to trigger dragon force. One can also devour 1000 spell power of raw mana if one can obtain a source (ex. Etherion cannon). Basic elements in an area (such as a torch) will result in 5 spell power. If a torch has no reason being there with zero significant purpose you will be dealt with. Also you can't eat your own magic.

    Force will result in a large stat boost which is unique to each slayer whilst in their force mode (although all slayers have their stat boosts predetermined. (total stat boost will be +50)) 1st generation dragon force lasts 10 posts. 20+ goes to speed, 20+ to spell power and 10+ to Strenght.
    D Rank Spells:


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Magnet Fist (雷竜の磁拳, Rairyuu no Jiken)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user concentrates electrical energy into his fist, then, he launches himself towards the opponent with a charged and powerful punch.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - It's a very knockbacking spell, being able to knock back the opponent 20 meters away. <--- 60 Feet (20 Meters) Is a No go, place this at 5 feet as this is a D-rank (1.5 meters)
    - Though it's a melee spell, the user can launch himself very far, being able to hit enemies from a long distance.
    - It also travels at a good speed.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's one-directioned, so the user can only launch himself in one direction and is unable to change direction, unless if he cancels the spell.
    - The spell can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - Any spell of higher rank can stop the user from approaching the target.
    - It's a very loud spell and is easy to spot if the user tries to sneak attack.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35
    Speed: 20 meters per second


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Talons (雷竜のかぎ爪, Rairyuu no Kagitsume)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user charges lightning energy into his lower leg and foot, sharpening it and boosting its power. He then sends them towards the opponent as a kick. He can also split it up into both his legs and then do two kicks at once.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - The user can use this attack to counter another spell at the same rank.
    - The talons are very strong and can smash through the walls from a spell of the same rank.
    - If the user hits the target/opponent well enough, it'll get pushed 20 meters away.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's a melee spell, so the user won't be able to reach out for anyone further away than the max range of this spell.
    - The spell, just as the previous and next ones, can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - A strong wall of a higher rank will be able to block the spell without getting destroyed instantly.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 10 meters
    Damage: 35 (Halfed if split into both legs, so each does 17)
    Speed: 20 meters per second


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Thunderbolt (雷竜の雷獣, Rairyuu no Raijū)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user points his head towards the opponent. Small bolts of lightning will appear at the edge of his "horn" (which is his hair, it's just shaped as a horn). The user will then launch out the bolts in one beam of thunderbolts. out.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can move the launched thunderbolt in many different directions with the same speed as normal, until it has reached its max range.
    - Causes D Rank Damage.
    Weaknesses:
    - It'll have a little effect on earth magic users, compared to his other spells.
    - If the enemy has a greater defense than this magic's rank, it won't have any good affect.
    - It'll only paralyze enemies of lower ranks than the user.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35
    Speed: 20 meters per second


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Scales (雷竜の秤, Rairyuu no Hakari)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user covers himself with a cloak of lightning, which defends him from outcoming attacks.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Defends from other spells or offensive attacks of other types (for example physical attacks and such).
    - The user can move around as freely as normally with this spell activated.
    - If the target impacts the user's scales, he/she will get pushed 5 meters back.
    Weaknesses:
    - Doesn't do any damage, other than sending someone away.
    - If it takes too much damage, it'll break down.
    - It won't paralyze anyone by contact.
    Effects;
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Size: Height - 3ft | Width - 3ft


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Slash (雷竜の斬り, Rairyuu no Kiri)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user slashes the air rapidly with his hands. This creates lightning slashes, which launches towards the opponent.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range, just like the Thunderbolt, and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can do up to 3 slashes in the air, which makes him able to hit multiple targets.
    - It's very sharp slashes and can easily cut through rocks and boulders; it can even cut through walls from the opponent's spell (just as long as the opponent is the same rank or lower).
    Weaknesses:
    - The user can't break defenses that are too strong for him.
    - If the opponent is close to Nasude, he can cancel the spell if he's fast enough.
    - It's not very effective to metal.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35 (Divided into three if split up, which does about 11 each)
    Speed: 20 meters per second

    I will be taking this Over for Rin, Edits that need to be made will be in Red, I hope we can Get along and get this Magic done right away so that you can get to Role Playing and doing the other things you want to be doing
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    Alright, Bump



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    Post by Kenshin on Fri 25 Dec 2015, 2:15 am

    Unfortunately Kentai I have seen something that must have been overlooked, you see in the spell Lightning Dragons Thunderbolt one of your strengths is that it causes D-rank damage, and that is not actually a strength, so until this strength is changed I cannot approve of this magic (I ran this by Rin beforehand and she gave me permission to do this)




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    Post by Kenshin on Fri 25 Dec 2015, 4:20 pm

    Okay Kentai, as I said Rin has given me permission to reevaluate your magic and I have found a few other things that'll need to be changed as well, I will put the things that require edits in red so that you can see them easily


    Kentai Wrote wrote:Name of Magic; Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type/Subtype of Magic; Caster - Lost - Slayer
    Current Rank; D
    Description; This ancient Lost Magic was taught to Nasude by the Lord of the Lightning Dragons, Racornis, who found, raised and made Nasude a true warrior. This magic is a distinct type of Lost Magic, which utilizes the tremendous power of dragons. Just like a God and Demon Slayer, Dragon Slayers has their own respective element, which for example can be comsumed in order to restore or boost their power, but only in its pure form. The form of elemental magic they use is neutral (pure) one which is in between the light and dark side of the magical spectrum. This type of magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon non-human type opponents.

    Nasude has taught Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic, which gives him the ability to consume pure forms of lightning and likewise use it for his spells in many ways, such as in Offensive and Defensive ways. In addition, Dragon Slayers has improved senses compared to normal humans, like smell, hearing, strenght and sight. Also, the appearance of the lightning is depended on the user's feelings and mind, so the more serious Nasude is, the more intense are the lightning that surrounds him, so called "Will of Thunder".

    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Nasude can consume pure lightning, whether if it's from a spell or natural, in order to boost or restore his stats.
    - Due to his respective element, Nasude has an increased speed, which is a great advantage in battle.
    - As a Lightning Dragon Slayer, he has complete control over the lightning element.
    Weaknesses:
    - Though Dragon Slayers get all of these perks, they do have one set back: Motion sickness. Dragon Slayers cannot ride on vehicles of why kind without getting motion sickness.
    - A Lightning Dragon Slayer's speed is superior, but the element is also very loud, which would give Nasude a disadvantage in stealth.
    - If Nasude uses his magic while being in contact with water, it would be dangerous for his allies to approach him or stay nearby him, due to the spreading of electricity. He would be forced to stay away from them, which would be bad, if they are fighting together.

    Traits;
    - As a Dragon Slayer, the user has 10% increased senses, including smell, hearing and sight.
    - Nasude also has an increased jump ability, which makes him able to jump up to 20 meters in the air when having his feet on a surface (this doesn't increase his speed movement, though. He can only jump as fast as his agility allows).
    - The lightning power from Nasude's spells is very wild and can leave the hit target stunned after impact from a spell. <------ Okay man, I know for a fact that Rin has told you to change this to an actual trait, so please change it
    - Nasude can turn himself into pure lightning and move up to 5 meters at D Rank directly, which is increased by 2 meters per rank-up. In this form, he is unaffected by physical and long-range attacks that aren't boosted by magic. He can only use this form 4 times per thread.

    First Generation Dragon Force:



    D-rank Spells:

    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Magnet Fist (雷竜の磁拳, Rairyuu no Jiken)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user concentrates electrical energy into his fist, then, he launches himself towards the opponent with a charged and powerful punch.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - It's very effective to earth mages <---------- How strong exactly, how much extra damage does it do? Also why earth exactly, I'd say metal is the better choice because earth is a natural insulator, meaning electricity would do less damage, while metal is a natural conductor, meaning it would do more damage
    - Though it's a melee spell, the user can launch himself very far, being able to hit enemies from a long distance.
    - It also travels at a good speed
    Weaknesses:
    - It's one-directioned, so the user can only launch himself in one direction and is unable to change direction, unless if he cancels the spell.
    - The spell can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - Any spell of higher rank can stop the user from approaching the target<-----------You make it sound like being hit with another spell only cancels out the effect, plus I'd say that if you're hit by ANY spell while approaching you should take the damage, not just spells of a higher rank, otherwise you're basically immune to D-rank spells, something that's just not okay
    - It's a very loud spell and is easy to spot if the user tries to sneak attack.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35 <-------Remove the damage, otherwise when your spell power increases the damage will stay at 35, rather than get stronger like its meant to
    Speed: 20 meters per second <-------Remove the speed, there is a new speed system in place in the magic system rules


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Talons (雷竜のかぎ爪, Rairyuu no Kagitsume)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user charges lightning energy into his lower leg and foot, sharpening it and boosting its power. He then sends them towards the opponent as a kick. He can also split it up into both his legs and then do two kicks at once.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - The user can use this attack to counter another spell at the same rank.
    - The talons are very strong and can smash through the walls from a spell of the same rank.
    - If the user hits the target/opponent well enough, it'll get pushed 20 meters away. <------------I know for a fact that both Raven and Rin told you a D-rank spell that has a knockback of 20 meters is not allowed, it may have been a different spell but it still applies, so please change it to 5ft/1.5 meters
    Weaknesses:
    - It's a melee spell, so the user won't be able to reach out for anyone further away than the max range of this spell.
    - The spell, just as the previous and next ones, can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - A strong wall of a higher rank will be able to block the spell without getting destroyed instantly.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 10 meters
    Damage: 35 (Halfed if split into both legs, so each does 17) <-------- As I said, remove the damage or the spell will keep that damage when your spell power increases
    Speed: 20 meters per second <--------Again please remove the speed


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Thunderbolt (雷竜の雷獣, Rairyuu no Raijū)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user points his head towards the opponent. Small bolts of lightning will appear at the edge of his "horn" (which is his hair, it's just shaped as a horn). The user will then launch out the bolts in one beam of thunderbolts. out.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can move the launched thunderbolt in many different directions with the same speed as normal, until it has reached its max range.
    - It can be divided in five bolts if the user wants to, and therefore hit multiple targets. <------With that you'll have to mention that if he does split the thunderbolt then each only does a fraction of the spells actual damage, so if you split it into five each bolt will only do a fifth of D-rank damage, meaning that only if all five hit will it do D-rank damage
    Weaknesses:
    - It'll have a little effect on earth magic users, compared to his other spells. <----------How much less damage?
    - If the enemy has a greater defense than this magic's rank, it won't have any good affect. <--------Do you mean magical defense, or a defensive spell, it's quite vague and thus some people may try to exploit it
    - It'll only paralyze enemies of lower ranks than the user <--------There is no mention of paralysis in either the description nor the strengths, meaning that it can't actually paralyze anyone, if you want to add paralysis then you need to put it in either the strengths or description and it needs a way to resist it, such as an endurance or magical defense check
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35 (7 if divided) <--------Remove
    Speed: 20 meters per second <-------Remove


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Scales (雷竜の秤, Rairyuu no Hakari)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning <----------This spell is clearly Defensive, not Offensive, please change
    Rank; D
    Description; The user covers himself with a cloak of lightning, which defends him from outcoming attacks.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Defends from other spells or offensive attacks of other types (for example physical attacks and such).
    - The user can move around as freely as normally with this spell activated.
    - If the target impacts the user's scales, he/she will get pushed 5 meters back <------- 5ft not meters, that's 1.5 metrs in case you're wondering
    Weaknesses:
    - Doesn't do any damage, other than sending someone away.
    - If it takes too much damage, it'll break down. <-------how much damage?
    It won't paralyze anyone by contact <--------Once again there is no mention of paralysis
    Effects;
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Size: Height - 3ft | Width - 3ft


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Slash (雷竜の斬り, Rairyuu no Kiri)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user slashes the air rapidly with his hands. This creates lightning slashes, which launches towards the opponent.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range, just like the Thunderbolt, and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can do up to 3 slashes in the air, which makes him able to hit multiple targets <--------If he creates 3 then each will ony do 1/3rd or D-rank damage, make sure that is mentioned
    - It's very sharp slashes and can easily cut through rocks and boulders; it can even cut through walls from the opponent's spell (just as long as the opponent is the same rank or lower) <---------change so that it can only cut through spells of the same rank, or spells that it has a certain amount more strength than
    Weaknesses:
    - The user can't break defenses that are too strong for him. <---------Not really a weakness, that's a fact, add a new one
    - If the opponent is close to Nasude, he can cancel the spell if he's fast enough <------Reword so that it says the spell is cancelled if his arm slashes are stopped
    - It's not very effective to metal <--------I honestly don't understand this, earth is a natural insulator of electricity while metal is a natural conductor, so for all intents and purposes it should do extra damage to metal and less damage to earth
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters
    Damage: 35 (Divided into three if split up, which does about 11 each) <------Remove
    Speed: 20 meters per second <--------Remove




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    Alright, I hope that I didn't miss anything. Bump



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    Post by Kenshin on Wed 30 Dec 2015, 8:54 pm

    Okay Kentai, this looks much better, but you have missed a couple of things, but once they are fixed your magic will be ready for approval

    Kentai Said wrote:Name of Magic; Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type/Subtype of Magic; Caster - Lost - Slayer
    Current Rank; D
    Description; This ancient Lost Magic was taught to Nasude by the Lord of the Lightning Dragons, Racornis, who found, raised and made Nasude a true warrior. This magic is a distinct type of Lost Magic, which utilizes the tremendous power of dragons. Just like a God and Demon Slayer, Dragon Slayers has their own respective element, which for example can be comsumed in order to restore or boost their power, but only in its pure form. The form of elemental magic they use is neutral (pure) one which is in between the light and dark side of the magical spectrum. This type of magic deals double damage to Lizard, Wyvern, and Dragon non-human type opponents.

    Nasude has taught Lightning Dragon Slayer Magic, which gives him the ability to consume pure forms of lightning and likewise use it for his spells in many ways, such as in Offensive and Defensive ways. In addition, Dragon Slayers has improved senses compared to normal humans, like smell, hearing, strenght and sight. Also, the appearance of the lightning is depended on the user's feelings and mind, so the more serious Nasude is, the more intense are the lightning that surrounds him, so called "Will of Thunder".

    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Nasude can consume pure lightning, whether if it's from a spell or natural, in order to boost or restore his stats.
    - Due to his respective element, Nasude has an increased speed, which is a great advantage in battle.
    - Due to the element, Nasude can stun/paralyze people with some of his spells.
    Weaknesses:
    - Though Dragon Slayers get all of these perks, they do have one set back: Motion sickness. Dragon Slayers cannot ride on vehicles of why kind without getting motion sickness.
    - A Lightning Dragon Slayer's speed is superior, but the element is also very loud, which would give Nasude a disadvantage in stealth.
    - If Nasude uses his magic while being in contact with water, it would be dangerous for his allies to approach him or stay nearby him, due to the spreading of electricity. He would be forced to stay away from them, which would be bad, if they are fighting together.

    Traits;
    - As a Dragon Slayer, the user has 10% increased senses, including smell, hearing and sight.
    - Nasude also has an increased jump ability, which makes him able to jump up to 20 meters in the air when having his feet on a surface (this doesn't increase his speed movement, though. He can only jump as fast as his agility allows).
    - If up in the clouds, Nasude can jump between clouds like a bolt in order to move around areas rapidly. He can move 5 meters per jump and only jump 4 times as D Rank. It increases by 1 for every rank-up.
    - Nasude can turn himself into pure lightning and move up to 5 meters at D Rank directly, which is increased by 2 meters per rank-up. In this form, he is unaffected by physical and long-range attacks that aren't boosted by magic. He can only use this form 4 times per thread.

    D-Rank Spells:
    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Magnet Fist (雷竜の磁拳, Rairyuu no Jiken)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user concentrates electrical energy into his fist, then, he launches himself towards the opponent with a charged and powerful punch.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - It's very effective to metal mages, as the damage is increased by 25%
    - Though it's a melee spell, the user can launch himself very far, being able to hit enemies from a long distance.
    - It also travels at a good speed.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's one-directioned, so the user can only launch himself in one direction and is unable to change direction, unless if he cancels the spell.
    - The spell can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - Any spell of higher rank can stop and damage the user, before he approaches the target.
    - It's a very loud spell and is easy to spot if the user tries to sneak attack.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Talons (雷竜のかぎ爪, Rairyuu no Kagitsume)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user charges lightning energy into his lower leg and foot, sharpening it and boosting its power. He then sends them towards the opponent as a kick. He can also split it up into both his legs and then do two kicks at once.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - The user can use this attack to counter another spell at the same rank.
    - The talons are very strong and can smash through the walls from a spell of the same rank.
    - If the user hits the target/opponent well enough, it'll get pushed 5ft/1.5 meters meters away.
    Weaknesses:
    - It's a melee spell, so the user won't be able to reach out for anyone further away than the max range of this spell.
    - The spell, just as the previous and next ones, can be consumed by other Lightning Slayers.
    - A strong wall of a higher rank will be able to block the spell without getting destroyed instantly.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 10 meters


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Thunderbolt (雷竜の雷獣, Rairyuu no Raijū)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user points his head towards the opponent. Small bolts of lightning will appear at the edge of his "horn" (which is his hair, it's just shaped as a horn). The user will then launch out the bolts in one beam of thunderbolts. out.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can move the launched thunderbolt in many different directions with the same speed as normal, until it has reached its max range.
    - It can be divided in five bolts, which each bolt has 1/5 D Rank damage in, if the user wants to, and therefore hit multiple targets.
    Weaknesses:
    - It'll have a little effect on earth magic users, compared to his other spells. The spell is reduced by 50% when against earth mages.
    - If the enemy has a greater defense spell of this magic's rank or higher, it won't do any damage.
    - It'll only paralyze enemies of lower ranks than the user. <--------As I said Kentai, there is no mention of paralysis in either the description nor the strengths, meaning that it can't actually paralyze anyone, if you want to add paralysis then you need to put it in either the strengths or description and it needs a way to resist it, such as an endurance or magical defense check
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Scales (雷竜の秤, Rairyuu no Hakari)
    Type; Defensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user covers himself with a cloak of lightning, which defends him from outcoming attacks.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - Defends from other spells or offensive attacks of other types (for example physical attacks and such).
    - The user can move around as freely as normally with this spell activated.
    - If the target impacts the user's scales, he/she will get pushed 5ft/1.5 meters back.
    Weaknesses:
    - Doesn't do any damage, other than sending someone away.
    - If it takes damage of a spell that's a rank higher than the user, or more, it'll break down. If the opponent's spell is a rank higher or more, this spell won't protect Nasude in any way.
    - It won't paralyze anyone by contact. <--------As I said once again, there is no mention of paralysis, please add it into the strengths or as a trait if you want paralysis
    Effects;
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Size: Height - 3ft | Width - 3ft


    Name of Spell; Lightning Dragon's Slash (雷竜の斬り, Rairyuu no Kiri)
    Type; Offensive - Lightning
    Rank; D
    Description; The user slashes the air rapidly with his hands. This creates lightning slashes, which launches towards the opponent.
    Information;
    Strenghts:
    - This is a long-range, just like the Thunderbolt, and can reach further away, which gives it an advantage against distancing enemies.
    - The user can do up to 3 slashes in the air, each slash having 1/3 D Rank damage, which makes him able to hit multiple targets.
    - It's very sharp slashes and can cut through walls from the opponent's spell, if the same rank, and through spells taht it has a certain amount more strenght than.
    Weaknesses:
    - The slashes only moves in a speed of 75% of the original speed of the spell's rank.
    - If Nasude's arm slashes are stopped, the spell is cancelled.
    - It's not very effective to earth, decreasing the damage by 50%.
    Effects;
    Duration: Instant (1 post)
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Range: 30 meters




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    Post by Kentai on Thu 31 Dec 2015, 4:36 am

    - Due to the element, Nasude can stun/paralyze people with some of his spells.

    I already named that my magic can stun people in oen of the strenghts on the description. Just so u know.

    I hope that it's alright, thou. Bump



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    Post by Kenshin on Fri 01 Jan 2016, 10:15 am

    Okay, I will admit that I had overlooked that, so allow me to apologize for that one Kentai, my mistake entirely. But you still need to add in a way for people to resist the paralysis, such as an endurance check or magical defense check, you'll also need to say how long the effects of the paralysis can last, and what they do, like for example are they completely paralyzed and unable to move, if it an agility debuff of some form? What spells utilize this ability (since it only says that some of the spells use it, it is a little unclear, you'll need to add that into the strengths of the magic, and you can't just say that it'll paralyze mages of a lower rank, otherwise you'll just be able to paralyze enemies A-rank enemies with a D-rank spell when you reach S-rank, you know what I mean, you need an actual system for it) Feel free to check out the paralysis system I have for my Amaterasu spells, it's classified as a WIP atm because I'm modifying a couple of things, with Rin's permission of course, but I haven't touched the paralysis system so it is an example of a system that passed grading, to give you a couple of ideas, and if you want to just use it instead of thinking of a different one then I give you my complete permission to do so, and if you want some help thinking of one then feel free to PM me, I'll be more than hppy to help




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    Post by Kentai on Fri 01 Jan 2016, 10:37 am

    I took ur advice, as well as ur paralysis idea. I hope that it suits well enough to be APPROVED.. sooner or later XD (U might check the entire topic again, I made some very small changes in some of my spells' strenghts. Just to be sure)

    Bump!



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    Post by Kenshin on Fri 01 Jan 2016, 6:48 pm

    Okay, I have re-read EVERYTHING, and there is only one thing that needs to be fixed before I approve you, the weakness '- It'll only paralyze enemies with lower endurance than the user.' in Lightning Dragons Thunderbolt, can you please change that to '-This spell can only paralyze opponents when used as a singular bolt, if more than one bolt is fired then there are no paralytic effects', once that is done bump it and I will be happy to approve, provided you haven't made any changes anywhere else




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    Post by Kentai on Sun 03 Jan 2016, 3:59 am

    Changed, and no other changes. Buuuumped



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    Post by Kenshin on Sun 03 Jan 2016, 4:20 am

    Awesome going Kentai, this has been a long time coming but now here we are, I only have one more thing to say




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